Every parody of this song I read had HORRIBLE pacing, but this one has pretty good pacing. it was pretty funny at first, and then got boring. 433

I agree with Dominic on the pacing matter, but I thought the laugh factor was consistent. I liked the X-P-E-N-S-I-V-E part too; I love it when people put spins like on the original. 4-5-5.

he he I thought it was kinda funny. Everything is waaaaay to expensive now a days. lol

Just the Shake _____________ "Scuse me? Hey, hello! Can I get a milkshake to go? Hell no, I don't want no fries "Cos they too much of an expensive price "Cos I ain't no rich person, no I ain't no rich person, no Hell no, I don't want no fries "Cos they too much of an expensive price "Cos I ain't no rich person, no I ain't no rich person, no Whoa, just the shake Where's my shake? Whoa, just the shake Where's my shake? Whoa, just the shake Where's my shake? Whoa, just the shake Where's my shake? I heard that you were makin'shakes So I rushed down here in hopes to get one Now you're on the speaker askin' if I wanted some fries Have you lost your mind? Are you takin'pills? Did you have one too many Happy Meals? I'm on a diet and their heavily overpriced Hell no, I don't want no fries "Cos they too much of an expensive price "Cos I ain't no rich person, no I ain't no rich person, no Hell no, I don't want no fries "Cos they too much of an expensive price "Cos I ain't no rich person, no I ain't no rich person, no Whoa, just the shake Where's my shake? Whoa, just the shake Where's my shake? Whoa, just the shake Where's my shake? Whoa, just the shake Where's my shake? So that's right, fool, you gon' have to die If I look in here and find a fry Both of us know that I have told you Over and over again So watch out punk Gonna get all crunk Gonna act all drunk Gonna lay you out That's right, I'm the last one standin' Another one ate my dust Hell no, I don't want no fries "Cos they too much of an expensive price "Cos I ain't no rich person, no I ain't no rich person, no Hell no, I don't want no fries "Cos they too much of an expensive price "Cos I ain't no rich person, no I ain't no rich person, no Whoa, just the shake Where's my shake? Whoa, just the shake Where's my shake? Whoa, just the shake Where's my shake? Whoa, just the shake Where's my shake? (Lemme' hear you say) Your fries are expensive X-P-N-S-I-V-E Your fries are expensive X-P-N-S-I-V-E Again, your fries are expensive X-P-N-S-I-V-E Your fries are expensive X-P-N-S-I-V-E Hell no, I don't want no fries "Cos they too much of an expensive price "Cos I ain't no rich person, no I ain't no rich person, no Hell no, I don't want no fries "Cos they too much of an expensive price "Cos I ain't no rich person, no I ain't no rich person, no Whoa, just the shake Where's my shake? Whoa, just the shake Where's my shake? Whoa, just the shake Where's my shake? Whoa, just the shake Where's my shake?

You spelt ?expensive? wrong to fit in the song.