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Song Parodies -> "Smelt You on the Bus Line (Extra Stank Edit)"
Original Song Title:
"I Heard it Through the Grapevine"
(MP3)Original Performer:
Marvin Gaye
Parody Song Title:
"Smelt You on the Bus Line (Extra Stank Edit)"
Parody Written by:
Below Average Dave
The Lyrics
This one took the suggestions of several AmIRighters including Stu McArthur, Red Ant, and Agrimorfee. . .Lots of lines were changed in addition to ones pointed out, here this new edit here as always free. . .just like the rest of them:)
Oooh, I sat on down right next to you
but my lord it made me want to puke
Killing the flies, they fall to the floor
From your shirt a green haze
was stinkin' like a corpse
My eyes were turning red as I prayed
My nose was in disarray
Cantcha tell I smelt you on the Bus Line
Stink to high heaven covered in grime
Yeah you smelt bad on the Bus Line
Oooh I'm itching from your head lice
Stanky, Stanky Blaaa
(I smelt you on the Bus Line and you need to take a shower baby)
(oooooooooo. .oo. oo.o)
Oh man I really don't want to pry
But your cologne's been misapplied
Take a bath, oh that is what I plea
Lose the stench and it will set you free
Dude, You've got mold on your head
and the stench would raise the dead
Great scotts, I smelt you on the Bus Line
Odor so bad I wanted to die
Oooh, forgot to wipe your behind
Tore up my nose, yes you're a gag line
Stanky, Stanky ehh
(Smelt crud on the Bus Line and you really need to check your hygiene )
(OOOooo. .O. oo.oo.ooooo)
People run to the back when it's you they see
Deodorant gave you the third degree
But somehow I got stuck by you
Get off now, this place smells like a zoo
I just can't take no more
Oh Bus Driver Please open the door.
So I dont smell you on the Bus Line
Now I'm sure that I'll be fine
Oh No, you're stinking up the Bus Line
OOo, Think I'm gonna stay behind
Jeese you Stinkin' yeah
(Ran off of the Greyhound 'cause your stench just may've killed me shady)
(yeah yeah yeah)
Stanky Stanky I know
(Smelt you on the Bus Line and I couldn't see my destination)
that you think it's a joke
(yeah yeah yeah)
said I smelt you on the Bus Line
(Stanking up the Greyhound and I can't take no more breath no baby)
Oooo I smelt you on the Bus Line
but my lord it made me want to puke
Killing the flies, they fall to the floor
From your shirt a green haze
was stinkin' like a corpse
My eyes were turning red as I prayed
My nose was in disarray
Cantcha tell I smelt you on the Bus Line
Stink to high heaven covered in grime
Yeah you smelt bad on the Bus Line
Oooh I'm itching from your head lice
Stanky, Stanky Blaaa
(I smelt you on the Bus Line and you need to take a shower baby)
(oooooooooo. .oo. oo.o)
Oh man I really don't want to pry
But your cologne's been misapplied
Take a bath, oh that is what I plea
Lose the stench and it will set you free
Dude, You've got mold on your head
and the stench would raise the dead
Great scotts, I smelt you on the Bus Line
Odor so bad I wanted to die
Oooh, forgot to wipe your behind
Tore up my nose, yes you're a gag line
Stanky, Stanky ehh
(Smelt crud on the Bus Line and you really need to check your hygiene )
(OOOooo. .O. oo.oo.ooooo)
People run to the back when it's you they see
Deodorant gave you the third degree
But somehow I got stuck by you
Get off now, this place smells like a zoo
I just can't take no more
Oh Bus Driver Please open the door.
So I dont smell you on the Bus Line
Now I'm sure that I'll be fine
Oh No, you're stinking up the Bus Line
OOo, Think I'm gonna stay behind
Jeese you Stinkin' yeah
(Ran off of the Greyhound 'cause your stench just may've killed me shady)
(yeah yeah yeah)
Stanky Stanky I know
(Smelt you on the Bus Line and I couldn't see my destination)
that you think it's a joke
(yeah yeah yeah)
said I smelt you on the Bus Line
(Stanking up the Greyhound and I can't take no more breath no baby)
Oooo I smelt you on the Bus Line
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I smell 5s.
i can relate...i was on a bus the other day that smelled like an outhouse...wasn't sure of the offender
"Deodorant gave you the third degree" lol.... Wow, that's an impressive bus line you've got there!
555. I know the feeling.
It takes some dedication to rework your own parodies, Dave. This was much sharper. 555
A malodorous experience, but did you ever ride the busses in India? They're called chunder busses because they are never cleaned out.
Thank you everyone. . .Smelt You on the Bus Line was one of my better originals. . .but it just needed some fine tuning to be really good--I'm trying to improve my writing to the level that I believe I should be at--not that I think I am terrible, but I knew I could do better, and you guys have all encouraged me to keep trying harder and harder on future work.
Good work. Smelly, smelly.
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