I think the idea for this parody wasn't bad, but you need to back it up with better pacing.

the bad porn r devils in the flesh posing with woman or man flesh to degrade sexual fantasies through real people of god imagination if they look at it its like looking into a blackhole of their confusion to feel attracted to them., always look to the light real girls and guys imagination isn't like satans children they are perversed. real people having sex give good flowing life forces ..negative-girl takes away the positive guys energy converting his mind and heart to feel the real agony of their miserable world to satisfy their thirst to be snuff the light out of our soul so they could assault over us, if the fire of love burn in your soul. satans children are powerless strangers roaming arround us like they are unaware of you. if you give into the darkness you feel the negative energy they truley carry and their are many of satans children waiting for you to fall in your sexual immoral way to get into your world to make you fear!..bringing war and strife to your vision through their imaginations of your soul comming to a ruin. to give them more of a reality in our presence.. so keep the love in your heart burning for true passion and love not false gestures to lead u into a world of confusion. if you have sex with one of satans child who r in the flesh walking arround its because we were programmed by our lust for sex will make it easier to be in their presence to feel arroused because of your weakness to give into the flesh removing your foundation of peace of the mind and heart by them leeching your power to hurt them by only being at peace with self will be stripped away lil by lil giving those demons in the flesh a opportunity to manipulate your heart through their suggestions of negative words to your mind. Jesus is the Only Door Way back to Salvation.. reading and excersizing faith--most church buildings are feeled with demons in the flesh looking like people who born into this world like you and i to decieve u. so always look to the light.. real people who you truly feel are real to you in your heart. your Mom and Dad could be satans child so Look to the light not the darkness .. real people!!!!!with real emotions is a healthy lifestyle..so keep the fire of god burning in your soul to ward off pests who pretend to be your friends and family.. Amen, thankyou Jesus!!! don't give in to their misrable world by the power of prayer ,Love and Faith, keep the flame of your soul burning its hell fire to satan and his children who are shopping arround in malls acting like u aint their or they are aware of you depending how real they seem to look but its false imaginations looking into your heart through your eyes touching your emotions toward them to make them feel alive. Remember they are cast down within themselves thats why they seem nice to sucker our attention to giving them our emotions to them a simple hey or a smile given them a apportunity to slither into your life to steal away your joy by them being in your presence. So keep up the good fight of faith in Christ Jesus who God gave to us to comfort our hearts and mind in this world full of fallen angels in the flesh who r intelligent in their motive toward your downfall so don't ever give them the chance to be a reality in your world..In Jesus name Amen.. :)